My friday!
WELL HELLO!!
I wake up 6.30 a.m because my littlesyster was yell. I go shower and get ready. I almoust late my buss but luckily I run sufficiently fast. At the school I was really tired, but fortunately I had only one glass and it was friday so that make me happyer. After school I went in the libery to study since I have next week lots of tests. I read alone because emilia was too tired neither manage come at the school SUPRISE SUPRICE! In the libery I go in Sello chill with my frends who I hadn`t see a very long time. From Sello we went hanging aroung at car. Then I went home the clock was about 12 p.m.
LOVE, kira
Contents: Good
A good effort, although at times your English is a bit hard to understand. Try to avoid Finglish and use simple sentences that make sense.
Media: Excellent
Fun!
Grammar: Satisfactory
| Posted 12 years, 6 months ago– I WOKE up AT
– little sister
– WAS YELLING
– I TOOK a shower
– GOT ready (Stick to the past tense!)
– AT school
– glass = lasi, class=tunti
– run, ran, run
– happIer
– too tired TO MAKE IT TO SCHOOL SURPRISE
– Library
– HUNG around